http://shimmertofade.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shimmertofade.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] nanowrimo_lj 2008-10-10 09:03 pm (UTC)

I like this. In my brainstorm freewrites I've tentatively established that her father is, for (negatively connotated) reasons unknown, out of the picture...if he were to, say, reappear, only to find that the daughter he has heard so much about has sunk into this negatively percieved disease....

Does this sound too cliche, though?

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