Daily Excerpt Post - November 1st

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This is where you can take a snippet from your writing from today that you want to share with the other members of the community. And feel free to comment on other people's snippets.

We're all about love and support here, and this is a great place to give it.


Comment limit is 4000 words. Please do not post multiple comments to show your entire NaNo.

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[princessstarr.livejournal.com]

Jay stroked the frets of his guitar, trying to look past the haze of stage lights and smoke that currently blocked his view. Kayla said she was going to wear her bright pink halter top tonight. “You know, the one I wore to the first show after we met,” she said on the phone earlier. Whether or not that it would be bright enough for him to see him was another question. That, and Vince’s groupies cloistered in the middle of the pit all seemed to be wearing varying shades of rose. Or that might have been the glare from the spotlights.
Oh, wait. Kayla’s bleached hair glowed against the club’s black lights, making her look even eerier with the top. She half-heartedly waved, signaling, “Here I am, being the supportive girlfriend of the backing guitarist.”

[fiveredsnakes.livejournal.com]

That last sentence is pretty gloomy and so, so perfect.