ext_61640 ([identity profile] alison-sky.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] nanowrimo_lj2008-11-10 12:15 pm
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Weekly Plot Help - Week of November 10th

Got a problem in your NaNo? Who doesn't?! But we've got a way to help!

Post here with your plot problems, and all through the week members of the community will scan through and see if they can help.

AKA - The best way to procrastinate is to help others!

So post your problem. Then take a moment to look at everyone else's and see if you can help them.

People helping people. That's what makes this community great :)

So have at it!

[identity profile] situationgirl.livejournal.com 2008-11-11 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
As a person who has dealt with stomach and intestinal ailments, I must say that this character will need a strict diet by which to continue living! At least until you find a cure. And if he recovers, he may find he has lost the ability to tolerate some foods, say, like a wheat sensitivity or something. But I think that would be intersting. If something that drastic happened to me, I'd mourn the loss of those foods for a while, and then my tastes would change to accomodate the foods I can tolerate. Maybe this will affect him in other ways, too, like how he views the world. Or maybe he'll be able to read personalities by the ways and things that people eat.

For a cure:
Take a moment and remind yourself that you're writing fiction. Then take ten minutes and look up some treatments for gastroparesis; even if the options are limited, you can use science as a basis to concoct a cure. There are many herbs and natural healing aids that my doctors were willing to discuss with me, so feel free to use those sources, too.

Just a few things I know of:

Swedish bitters - used to stimulate the stomach and prepare it for the reception of food.

Ginger/liquorice root/calendula - separately, or in a tea, used to calm the stomach.

Garlic - to fight off parasites and stimulate the immune system.

Honey and cider vinegar - used to tame stomach acid.

Turmeric - used to treat inflamation of any kind.

Anyhow, I hope this helps!


[identity profile] walkertxkitty.livejournal.com 2008-11-11 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Ack, I can't believe I missed so many of those! I had discarded most of my arsenal because they're not meant to be used on someone so badly compromised.

That just might stabilize him enough to get him out of the bayou and somewhere civilized.

And yeah...I don't think he'll be dipping into the jambalaya again, regardless of male or professional pride.