http://mteson.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mteson.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] nanowrimo_lj 2008-11-18 10:44 pm (UTC)

I was about to suggest a romantic subplot with a Mexican boy she meets in one of the coastal cities, and you can parallel her coming of age there with her realization that her Dad is not Mr. Perfect, making it a coming of age story as well as a drug thriller, but then you mentioned the boyfriend. Maybe you can ditch the boyfriend and introduce a new romantic interest, something that spurs her to think in a way she's never thought before?

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