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[vampedvixen.livejournal.com]

I hate my novel. My characters keep gushing out their feelings on topics like a bunch of sappy drunks sitting around saying, "I love you, man. No really.. IDK, my BFF YOU!!! You are the light in my sad little world. Let's always be friends, kay? No, really, pinky swear on it!!!!" I have a sudden fear that they'll burst into the Barney song soon.

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[hendrikboom.livejournal.com]

Let them think. Write what they are thinking.

[harmonious.livejournal.com]

I do, but it's still a lot more limiting than actual conversations. :)