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Nov. 5th, 2009 12:00 am![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
Okay, so I've already posted about my amnesiac girl, but now that I've started writing I've come into a couple problems. I want her to have periodic black outs (due to environmental circumstances, like this first one she encounters, because she's in a dystopian/post apocalyptic world she passes out from starvation, exhaustion and dehydration) and have "dreams" about her life which she doesn't remember upon waking up. It's basically there to feed the reader something about her past life. Of course it won't be anything to do with the trauma, but just memories that would stand out, like a first love or something I haven't decided on yet.
Now my question is, should I narrate it in 1st person? Or just keep it 3rd person? Or is even giving the reader that information like that a terrible idea? Fuuuuu
I'm also so terribly behind I want to cry. :(
eta: the reason i would want to do the dream sequences in 1st person is to differentiate between the past and present
Now my question is, should I narrate it in 1st person? Or just keep it 3rd person? Or is even giving the reader that information like that a terrible idea? Fuuuuu
I'm also so terribly behind I want to cry. :(
eta: the reason i would want to do the dream sequences in 1st person is to differentiate between the past and present