I think James should take over her mind :) I think that could be really intersting (*is currently writing a story where fairy tales are taking over the world*)
BUT...
If you like the OH NOES! plot better, then go with it. If you love it and are excited about it, don't worry about the angst and character development because:
1. It's probably better than you think it is and you're just really sick of your story at this point and thus are not an objective judge...
2. You can fix it during editing even if it's as horrible as you think it is.
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Date: 2007-11-10 02:54 am (UTC)BUT...
If you like the OH NOES! plot better, then go with it. If you love it and are excited about it, don't worry about the angst and character development because:
1. It's probably better than you think it is and you're just really sick of your story at this point and thus are not an objective judge...
2. You can fix it during editing even if it's as horrible as you think it is.