So, even though the entire ship was knocked into the blackhole, he's the only one who escapes? ... -- Actually, everybody who went through (half the ship... probably anywhere from 400 - 800-ish people, appear later in the future (or, I'm playing with past as well), but most of these people appear in open space. You're not guaranteed to land anywhere safe after all. So a majority of these people die instantly, float around, are never found (and maybe a few of them are, maybe it's assumed they're "left over" from the accident. So there will be old crew members around. Very few of them, probably who appeared before Jesh (maybe I'll through in one that appears after he does), and they're the lucky ones who randomly appeared on ships passing. Jesh appeared in an old rescue pod/life capsule whose resident is already dead - and not-so-freakishly gets picked up by a passing ship.
Now, I don't know how much you know about black holes, ... - You're right, I don't know much and I'm going to be doing a lot of reading for this month. But to me, getting my character and plot, is more important than getting ever detail of my black hole correct. I know it's an important aspect of the book, but then again, it's NaNo, and I can go back and fix things - but I was my word count in November (which isn't going to include massive pages of scientific explanation of what happened in the black hole...) :D
I like the idea that he was transporting something small and insignificant that will make all the difference in the war effort - but are you really sure that these 'rebels' are the ones in the wrong here? - The only reason I was saying these people are bad, for the moment, is because I'm thinking they actually are. They're more of "we're pissed of anarchists who want to see the whole of humanity go up in flames and burn in hell where they're suppose to be," than they are "this government is wrong, and we need to do something to fix it." I've also been playing with the idea of having the Burnside problem planet population be what's left over of a former UUC protected planet in which something happened, UUC didn't help, survivors had to relocate, and now they're pissed - which would add you're moral ambiguity. Not sure exactly, but I do think I want UUC to be the good guys, so I'm leaning less toward moral ambiguity (this is because I seem to write "BAD GOVERNMENT" and "moral ambiguous" stories all the time, so this would actually be something really different for me).
Wow, sorry that was so long. ...What do you think?
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Re: Sci-Fi story... in need of help
Date: 2008-10-12 06:59 pm (UTC)So, even though the entire ship was knocked into the blackhole, he's the only one who escapes? ... -- Actually, everybody who went through (half the ship... probably anywhere from 400 - 800-ish people, appear later in the future (or, I'm playing with past as well), but most of these people appear in open space. You're not guaranteed to land anywhere safe after all. So a majority of these people die instantly, float around, are never found (and maybe a few of them are, maybe it's assumed they're "left over" from the accident. So there will be old crew members around. Very few of them, probably who appeared before Jesh (maybe I'll through in one that appears after he does), and they're the lucky ones who randomly appeared on ships passing. Jesh appeared in an old rescue pod/life capsule whose resident is already dead - and not-so-freakishly gets picked up by a passing ship.
Now, I don't know how much you know about black holes, ... - You're right, I don't know much and I'm going to be doing a lot of reading for this month. But to me, getting my character and plot, is more important than getting ever detail of my black hole correct. I know it's an important aspect of the book, but then again, it's NaNo, and I can go back and fix things - but I was my word count in November (which isn't going to include massive pages of scientific explanation of what happened in the black hole...) :D
I like the idea that he was transporting something small and insignificant that will make all the difference in the war effort - but are you really sure that these 'rebels' are the ones in the wrong here? - The only reason I was saying these people are bad, for the moment, is because I'm thinking they actually are. They're more of "we're pissed of anarchists who want to see the whole of humanity go up in flames and burn in hell where they're suppose to be," than they are "this government is wrong, and we need to do something to fix it." I've also been playing with the idea of having the Burnside problem planet population be what's left over of a former UUC protected planet in which something happened, UUC didn't help, survivors had to relocate, and now they're pissed - which would add you're moral ambiguity. Not sure exactly, but I do think I want UUC to be the good guys, so I'm leaning less toward moral ambiguity (this is because I seem to write "BAD GOVERNMENT" and "moral ambiguous" stories all the time, so this would actually be something really different for me).
Wow, sorry that was so long. ...What do you think?