Plot Twists...
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Hey guys, I'm just asking for help with some plot twists!
Okay, I have a lot of my plot worked out, but I was hoping maybe someone could come up with some really cool plot twists that I could shove in somewhere. *loves the plot twists!*
Okay, so I have two main characters, a servant girl named Doryn, and a squire named Kara, who are magically switched when the King's mage loses control over a spell.
Now Kara is at the Palace with the Prince, who recognizes her (when the body was Doryn's) from a recent attempted robbery on the King's carriage. He's been arguing with his parents lately about everything... from his arranged marriage to his not being able to help with fighting in the war against their neighboring country. He askes her to take him to meet her friends--who are a bunch of theives, belonging to a gang that has been harrasing the city for a long time.
Doryn is now in Kara's place as a squire, with her knight-master and her best friend, Dane (who is the prince's cousin. No, he's not very close to the throne.) Kara's body is a lot stronger than her own body was, and she gets a little... overexcited with her new, stronger body. She's always been a nasty piece of work, and with the strength she now has, she's turning into a bully--and damaging Kara's chances at being a knight. (And ugh, no, she's not the only female knight. There are a bunch.)
Of course, we have the jealous noble, who doesn't want the prince to be the heir and so tries to kill him--a few times. There's the war, which will come into play later in the story. There's whole bunch of stuff, but I'm really too lazy to write it all down now. I think you have enough to work on here.(?)
So that's the main thing. Any ideas?