POST YOUR NOVEL EXCERPT HERE!!!!

[jynxgirl.livejournal.com]

POST YOUR NOVEL EXCERPT HERE!!!!

Please keep it relatively short, and only in this thread. Thanks!

No more than 4000 words, and please no multiple posts!

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I have to post this, because I totally grossed myself out writing it.

[st-aurafina.livejournal.com]

Before he had finished talking, Anna's mouth was on his skin, and her teeth cut through the flesh. She felt the layers slide past her teeth, and counted them as they went: skin, fat, muscle. She tilted her head expertly, picturing the anatomy in her mind as she angled her approach, skipped the softer, sluggish basilic vein and punctured the elastic wall of the brachial artery. There! Her mouth filled with blood, and her eyelids fluttered with the sensation of it. Above her, she heard Tylo hiss between his teeth, but she ignored him, wrapping her hand around his arm and pulling him closer. He released his hold on his upper arm, and the blood flowed faster, not with a discernible pulse, but with a strong and steady flow. She swallowed, and swallowed again as heat rushed through her body. This was all that mattered. Time blurred, and she lost count of the number of times she had let her mouth fill and swallow. All she knew, when Tylo tried to prise her from his arm, was that she never wanted to stop. Tylo made a small noise, then hooked his fingers in her tangled hair, tugging her away with a sharp pull.

Re: I have to post this, because I totally grossed myself out writing it.

[ruth-the-sleuth.livejournal.com]

It's so rare that vampires actually see to know their way around the human anatomy. This is great.