Daily Excerpt Post - november 12th

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When I woke up, it wasn’t darkness anymore, and I was in the planet I once dreamt of as a child. I cannot describe its beauty. All I knew was that the beauty that lay before me was the kind only a dreamer could dream of, and it had ever existed, would’ve been demolished by the mass of vermin who’d rather go by the name of people.

I was walking down the familiar path when I came across the man I called the KADHAB. He walked by me as if he hadn’t recognized me at all. I was wondering why he was here, it was my world, my planet, how dare he barge into it?
I ran after him and touch his shoulder, but instead of my body touching something solid, it passed right through him like he didn’t exist.

“What! Who?” I managed to blabber.

He continued to walk as if nothing of that ever happened.

His pace suddenly quickened, and since I was walking behind him. I had to sort of run in order to keep up with him. He turned down the bifurcated river path, and I followed. He jumped over the rocks, and I followed him lose behind. He then jumped over the Low Mountain and sank deep down into the ground.