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[vampedvixen.livejournal.com]

I hate my novel. My characters keep gushing out their feelings on topics like a bunch of sappy drunks sitting around saying, "I love you, man. No really.. IDK, my BFF YOU!!! You are the light in my sad little world. Let's always be friends, kay? No, really, pinky swear on it!!!!" I have a sudden fear that they'll burst into the Barney song soon.

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[shhbabe.livejournal.com]

It's nano you moron. It's "I D K, my B F F you!" If you put the spaces in, they're counted as separate words.

Hee. My main character doesn't speak. He mutters and then goes off on tangents in his head and thinks about what happened three years ago, while other characters have conversations around him. So I guess I'm saying: could be worse!

[harmonious.livejournal.com]

Neither of my main chars speak much. :( It makes it hard to write a bunch of useless dialog when I can't think of anything else to write, haha!

[syntheticjesso.livejournal.com]

My character (note the singular) doesn't talk much either- she lives kind of an isolated life, thanks to her training. The temple she's in makes a point of discouraging socialization. When she does talk, it's usually to her cat.

The good thing, though, is that she really doesn't mind.

[blueveinwrists.livejournal.com]

This for me, too. And your icon makes me happy. I love mermaids.

[hendrikboom.livejournal.com]

Let them think. Write what they are thinking.

[harmonious.livejournal.com]

I do, but it's still a lot more limiting than actual conversations. :)